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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:20 am Post subject: |
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been busy lately, haven't had much a chance to do much art, but I have this:
And a painting of the virgin of Guadalupe I'll finish and have up in a little..
Edit: Also, one of the things I usually suck at is font. How does it look in this one? _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:28 am Post subject: |
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Really nice work. I think the font could be a little bolder or something other than single line if it were going to be a tattoo, but I really like it... _________________
| lloydy wrote: | | im going to have a scroll with her handprints, name,dob,a quote underneath held up by 2 angels ,then just making it look beutifull, as if it would be a scroll that jesus had sent, duff's flying round it and stuff, |
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:56 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Yeah I need to "fancy up" that F a bit I think.
I'm also gonna get some watercolor paper finally and attempt to color in a bunch of these.. _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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| Nice, I'm also not a big fan of the font. Besides the f, looks like the a's need work, too. |
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:22 pm Post subject: |
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Thats odd, out of all of them I like my a's the best. O.o _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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| I don't know, maybe it's that the lines don't touch. Especially the first "a", it almost looks like a "c" followed by an "l" or something. Maybe also on the first one the vertical line is extending too far above the loop than the one in "fades". The a in fades looks better to me, but just my untrained opinion. |
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:57 pm Post subject: |
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| I like the lettering. My only critique would be they are a little too close together. But I know you're trying to squeeze a lot in that little space. |
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Uhuh, I should probably re-work it and extend that banner out to give me some more room...
and I see what you mean magnumman.. hmm _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:35 pm Post subject: |
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| Don't mind me, I'm probably being overly critical and picky as I tend to be. Your artwork is very good. |
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:39 am Post subject: |
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heres that painting:
and then, just for fun.. threw stuff together like my first flash sheet! heh (yes, still need to fix the hinge on the coffin, this one was just for fun. Looks all professional looking or something )
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Still not a fan of the coffin peice, but the others, notable the 2 face chic, the anchor, adn the top corner rose, are all solid. I'm a sucker for traditional work though... _________________
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Does it make you feel better if I say the size is because its a dead baby?
but thanks  _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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| Your work is pretty solid, I like it a lot but I'm not an artist in anyway and love traditional American style. Not saying to go out and tattoo people, but your artwork on paper is alot better than most tattoos I see on people. |
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:11 am Post subject: |
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Thanks
Ugh I should really draw more. I had a dream last night that yorvo gave me an apprenticeship though O.o crazy ass dream... _________________ "We shall flow a river forth to thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti." |
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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Redo of an older drawing I had done once
Said older drawing (I like the mouth on this one more)
Larger version of JynxedTurtle's avatar.
something a friend wanted to get done, but now can't afford to.
and.. quick drawing for the fiance
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